tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2162110501165319533.post4046545567972695728..comments2023-05-04T19:17:07.327+10:00Comments on This is JustSal : Writing Genre - Process 002JustSalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04129668129421095907noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2162110501165319533.post-28492779715816458512010-02-25T19:38:10.319+11:002010-02-25T19:38:10.319+11:00Yep. This time I pictured myself as the protagonis...Yep. This time I pictured myself as the protagonist.<br /><br />Because if anyone can fight an army of zombies, it's a skinny guy with glasses.<br /><br />Thank you though. I am honoured to have a character in your story named after me. Not just any character. The male lead no less.<br /><br />I like the idea of it being someone he (I?) trusted attacking him (me?) and the confusion that follows.<br /><br />But you've almost hit a fifth of the way through and it's been mostly action so far. There's not a lot of words to die down, create a story, build up more action and then reach the conclusion.<br /><br />I guess that's the problem with 2,000 word stories.<br /><br />Of course you COULD kill the protagonist in the second action stint rather than wrapping up again.. but you wouldn't do that to me.. would you?ScoManhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01257077420839039136noreply@blogger.com